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ancient poetry


Ancient poetry


Hiranya she was the one who
was send to the world to fix it, the one who build the temple of Shamun
and Shyun. Hiranya was created by the god Xlopmy.


Xlopmy was the god of the gods.
So Xlopmy decided to create someone who is perfect and can control the darkness
of the earth. The days were short and the nights became long. When Hiranya the
half women half angel came to the earth things changed day by day; the days
became longer and the nights became shorter. There was a god with name Sloby
who told Xlopmy to create another angel to fix the darkness better. Also this
time the god Xlopmy created another angel but this angel was different from
hiranya. She named this different angel Angiate.Angiate became the keeper of
the ocean and the keeper of the demigods. Angiate was not like Hiranya; Angiate
thought she was the best. One time Angiate saw Hiranya how powerful and how the
people liked her because she helped the people around her and most of the
creatures there. Angiate became envy and said to her self ’’may you not be
anymore the keeper of god and bad, love and hate, hope and hopeless, I Angiate
will make you to be the one who is hated more than any beast of this field’’
one day Angiate tried to kill Hiranya the great one but the god heard of that
and helped Hiranya to escape from this battle. The god Xlopmy came and said
’’who is the one who tried to kill the perfect of the earth’’ the god Xlopmy
became really angry. The earth was shaking, the birds were dying, the beasts
were crying.


The god of the gods punished
Angiate for trying to kill the great one.Angiate was killed now from the god of
the gods Xlopmy and Xlopmy punish also the god Slopy because he was the one who
told Xlopmy to create another angel to fix the earth, but it became just worse.
So Xlopmy destroyed Angiate forever.


 


 


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 mimimausi3 20.11.2010, 15:13:29  
Avatar mimimausi3wow so viel kann ich nicht lesen passt mal auf und sagt mir ist das viel oder nich:ancient poetry Ancient poetry Hiranya she was the one who was send to the world to fix it, the one who build the temple of Shamun and Shyun. Hiranya was created by the god Xlopmy. Xlopmy was the god of the gods. So Xlopmy decided to create someone who is perfect and can control the darkness of the earth. The days were short and the nights became long. When Hiranya the half women half angel came to the earth things changed day by day; the days became longer and the nights became shorter. There was a god with name Sloby who told Xlopmy to create another angel to fix the darkness better. Also this time the god Xlopmy created another angel but this angel was different from hiranya. She named this different angel Angiate.Angiate became the keeper of the ocean and the keeper of the demigods. Angiate was not like Hiranya; Angiate thought she was the best. One time Angiate saw Hiranya how powerful and how the people liked her because she helped the people around her and most of the creatures there. Angiate became envy and said to her self ’’may you not be anymore the keeper of god and bad, love and hate, hope and hopeless, I Angiate will make you to be the one who is hated more than any beast of this field’’ one day Angiate tried to kill Hiranya the great one but the god heard of that and helped Hiranya to escape from this battle. The god Xlopmy came and said ’’who is the one who tried to kill the perfect of the earth’’ the god Xlopmy became really angry. The earth was shaking, the birds were dying, the beasts were crying. The god of the gods punished Angiate for trying to kill the great one.Angiate was killed now from the god of the gods Xlopmy and Xlopmy punish also the god Slopy because he was the one who told Xlopmy to create another angel to fix the earth, but it became just worse. So Xlopmy destroyed Angiate forever. ja,oder?

 xlopmy 20.11.2010, 22:22:11  
Avatar kein Bildhehe in schon viel aber ich hab in der schule eine 1 dafuer bekommen :) ich gehe auf eine americanische schule :) ja ist schon viel :P :)

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